nice draw

Very nice draw. A good job. Congratulations

nice and cool character

Nice job, I like the hair, and the character is very ... outspoken ...

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very nice character i like her eyes. +9/9

This is an excellent lineart but I think it misses some shadow to put the character more in relief

Very nice drawing style!

Though I agree with Jedah-Dohma on the relief

Well, it's a great pose alright, but perhaps you could redraw or trace it again, using a vary thickness of line to give weight to certain details...

Overall nice work.

I like her attitude and the hair. Looks dynamic... but the top of the head looks a bit "smashed"... like her parents dropped her as baby and she met the floor with her cranium , besides of that, is a good draw.

Great work, I like the hands and face, very good details and excellent attitude as mentioned earlier

Yes, the head is smashed x__x I always find my mistakes after I post my works, and to me seems unfair to correct them and republish, even because your critiques are about THIS work However I can correct the original one and, if I have the will, link it XD
I wake up 10 minutes ago
Thanks a lot everyone for critiques, I think I need a lot of them

I agree with Nell about the top of the character's head, but it's still very nice +5/5

Cool!

Love also the beginning work!

Good lineart, but if you wish to achieve a sense of depth and room in this, you really should use more shadow tones. Your character seems way too flat, especially the clothes. Try it, it can lift your drawing to a much higher level.

Lovely drawing
I dont know about smashed head or anything..
But it sure looks cool

A smashed head at the top doesn't seems so evident. All is fine for me. Good expression. +7/9!!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! this is my favrite of your stuff! i really like this one! the hands are awesome, and so is her expresion and pose. man i wish i could draw like that....................damn,

nice

i love the eyes and the hair....and the clothes.....lovely absolutely lovely

bello lo stile manga

non è stile manga XD lo sembra perchè è molto piatto e perchè ho sviluppato il mio tratto disegnando fumetti mangosi, ma in questo ho fatto un pochino di attenzione all'anatomia (i capelli sono mangosissimi)

thank you everyone ^_^

great drawing
i love the hands, but eveything is perfect too